Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- Energy and Solar System -

I am looking for myself in the center
    of my own solar system
    The thoughts just drifts with the wind
    The senses are united with the truth
    Life forms my heart
    Childhood memories in my soul
    wonderful happiness
    Blue as the sky
    and as a coral sea
    How the ocean reflects sunset colors game
    The night may let me in
    in a world where the stars play
    I can not explain it
    but it warms me
    and makes me whole





    13.09.2014
    A-L Andresen :)
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    - Thanks for my 6th place in the contest :)

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Poet Destroyer A January 1, 2015 at 7:02 PM thank you for the comment on my comment...PD Anne-Lise Andresen January 2, 2015 at 3:52 AM - Just a pleasure, Linda :)

Dr.Ram Mehta January 1, 2015 at 10:59 AM Wish you happy new year and congrats on the win, Anne Anne-Lise Andresen January 1, 2015 at 11:07 AM - Dr. Ram, thank you :) - Happy New Year !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison January 1, 2015 at 9:12 AM such a beautiful calming write- many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx Anne-Lise Andresen January 1, 2015 at 11:06 AM - Jan, thank you :) - Happy New Year !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans January 1, 2015 at 7:59 AM Very beautiful. Congratulations on your win and Happy New Year Anne Lise Anne-Lise Andresen January 1, 2015 at 8:01 AM - Brenda, thank you :) - Happy New Year !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne December 31, 2014 at 9:38 PM Congratulations Anne Lise on your win and best wishes in the new year! Anne-Lise Andresen January 1, 2015 at 5:25 AM - A contest I had forgotten - but pleasant with an 6th place - thank you, Maurice :) - Happy New Year !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode December 31, 2014 at 9:16 PM Congrats on your fine win and happy new year my friend Anne...huggs Anne-Lise Andresen January 1, 2015 at 5:25 AM - A contest I had forgotten - but pleasant with an 6th place - thank you, Kayod5 :) - Happy New Year !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A December 31, 2014 at 8:58 PM Anne,, thank you for supporting my contest. I'm taking this time to enjoy and invite you on over to my latest contest "Busted." Drop by if you'd like or have the time. Take Care, and enjoy the 2015... Happy new Year... Love Linda Anne-Lise Andresen January 1, 2015 at 5:24 AM - A contest I had forgotten - but pleasant with an 6th place - thank you,Linda :) - Happy New Year !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks October 14, 2014 at 7:16 PM Something's don't need to be explained... and other's are more beautiful for the not-knowing... well penned! Anne-Lise Andresen October 15, 2014 at 2:51 AM - Timothy, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tarek Hassan September 30, 2014 at 1:30 PM loveling feeling poem,wonderous moments of harmony with the cosmos Anne-Lise Andresen September 30, 2014 at 1:32 PM - Tarek, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser September 23, 2014 at 11:15 PM Such a vast place to seek one's self; we're all there, from time-to-time. Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2014 at 3:10 AM - M.L, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak September 18, 2014 at 8:18 AM Such a serene and calming feel to this one. So peaceful. Anne-Lise Andresen September 18, 2014 at 8:57 AM - Monterey, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans September 17, 2014 at 9:32 AM Your poem emanates such calm. Beautiful Anne Lise Anne-Lise Andresen September 17, 2014 at 11:25 AM - Brenda, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath September 16, 2014 at 10:03 AM Wow! a deep contrasting philosophy heard from you simply. Excellently done. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2014 at 12:09 PM - bl, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres September 15, 2014 at 12:08 PM the memories of past that built us as whole... that what makes this world colorful... enjoyed reading your magical poem!!! and how I love to see your avatar visiting my home.. :)thank you! Anne-Lise Andresen September 15, 2014 at 12:12 PM - Yes, it's true my friend AiyaH - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ma Yaseen September 15, 2014 at 3:57 AM Once again a beautiful writing from Anne... Thumbs Up Anne-Lise Andresen September 15, 2014 at 8:35 AM - Malik, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Audrey Haick September 14, 2014 at 6:36 PM Lovely poem, Anne-Lise! Very well written and expressed. Love, Annalise Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2014 at 6:55 PM - Annalise , thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux September 14, 2014 at 2:34 PM I like the premise of this piece and how well you expressed it. Well written! Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2014 at 2:39 PM - Richard, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick September 14, 2014 at 1:29 PM "The night may let me in in a world where the stars play I can not explain it"..I really like these lines..A very warm work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2014 at 1:35 PM - Dear Sara, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne September 14, 2014 at 12:57 PM just another great poem. as an aside I love your name Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2014 at 1:34 PM - Maurice, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bianca And Gerhard September 14, 2014 at 7:54 AM this is awesome , yes I feel the growing of a soul in depths of universe Anne Lise ! Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2014 at 1:33 PM - Always look on the bright side of life :))) - B & G, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 14, 2014 at 1:53 AM Wow amazingly beautiful Anne Lise! Love ur poem much! Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2014 at 5:59 AM - Dr. Upma, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich September 14, 2014 at 1:09 AM this one is really cool!!! I sure enjoyed reading it. Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2014 at 5:59 AM - Andrea, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chris G. Vaillancourt September 13, 2014 at 10:03 PM Nice image driven piece, great work. Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2014 at 5:59 AM - Chris, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker September 13, 2014 at 9:11 PM gentle lady, gentle vision, gentle poem Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2014 at 6:00 AM - Frederic, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley September 13, 2014 at 8:15 PM Your center stands in a beautiful world of poetic words, sun shining upon each day and life streaming forth. Rejoice, life stirs well within your heart! Great write!! Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2014 at 5:22 AM - Above all, people must learn to love themselves and their lives - Robert, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Energy And Solar System - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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