Energy

Interesting work..A grizzly bear snoring probably would be a very rolling rumbling sound indeed...Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..On most of my poems now I add something if you just click on "About This Poem"...The hummer is a hummingbird..Apparently the Albino Hummingbird isn't so rare..Someone sent me an email with a picture of one then I typed it into my search engine and there were many pictures of them..I personally have not seen one only pictures..Sara

Lovely writes, my friend. I especially like the first one

Wonderful use of imagery with interesting analogies. Keep up the good writing my friend. Thank you for stopping by with your kind words. Karen

You are on a roll with the kus Daver and doing a great job with all. I love especially the first on in this trio. The "fitful workings" is really special.

You just posted 4 haikus in a row...are u turning into a Japanese poet? ha ha. With Deb and Charle's contests and teaching on this site lately, I have grown more fond of this form. Enjoyed this set, Daver. More of yours to read. :) Gwendolen

Fine Haiku series Daver. It's good to hear your from Scottish stock. Us Scot's are the best, without a doubt. Have a lovely Sunday :)

daver .... daver..... that is an interesting an unique name i like it. really interesting haiku i like it very mucho

Excellent use of the "twist" in each verse, Daver. What creative images of nature! (I especially love the second verse.) Well done, my friend. Love, carolyn

sorry, but that seems to be the only way I can get the info to you!! Marie (at Shadowpoetry) thinks you have accidentally blocked me at your end . Do you have any computer friends who can unblock me by seeing your email account?

HI, Daver. Guess you can't get anything from me at hotmail. Here is the info you asked for: for one chapbook, $12.00 (10 + 2 shipping). Make checks out to Shadow Poetry. Shadow Poetry 1209 Milwaukee Street Excelsior Springs, MO 64024

The energy is overwhelming, I can't take it anymore... Good one, sir

enjoyed your energy!! I had to cups of joe tonight and I am wired for now.

Def. loaded with energy dear poet ! Very creative Dave ! Have a wonderful weekend sir....much love, james

Creative use of imagery for interesting reading. Keep on writing my friend. Happy Thanksgving! Karen

you have a quality that in my language means roughly something like this; silently floating...sorry, it means so much more but i can't find the right terms. I truly enjoyed it though. captivating

Yes, there is so much energy "roiling" beneath,Daver! You always are coming up with unique topics for your poems! Hey, did you get my hotmail reply? Let me know. I am dying to know if you are able to get my replies if not done thru PFT. Luv, Andrea

You are really good doing haiku Daver, I think if I had to choose, the first one is my favorite. that second line must be those peaceful snores. Keep up the great work.