Enemy

John is one of my worst enemies!
Kabir is also, he is bad!
Raju is not at all better than them.
I hate them all because they call me names.
They are my enemies, they are my classmates
So I faced them with a frowned face.
One day I heard these famous words,
Ringing in my ears as golden words.
‘Thou thyself art thy only friend,
Thou thyself art thy only enemy,
No other enemy but this self of mine,
And no other friends other than me.’
I repeat these words a hundred times
That made my heart calm as a lake.
Next time when I saw them all
I smiled at them, they returned the smile.
We hug all together and call different names
But we are not enemies, not anymore.



Honorable Mention in STRAND SELECT 5 ,any form ,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand
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Roy Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 10:58 AM
Congrats.... Very well expressed. God bless you.
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January 25, 2020 at 12:15 AM
Thank you Pratap for liking my poem..Have a great day..
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January 7, 2020 at 9:50 PM
Sincere congratulations for your Honorable Mention in Brian's contest, Jenish - keep the ink flowing, my friend, and best wishes for a bountiful and healthy New Year. Blessings! :o)
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January 8, 2020 at 3:34 AM
Thank you Gregory for your kind words.. Happy New Year..
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January 7, 2020 at 6:55 PM
Hi Jenish, Congratulations on your placement. It takes real courage to reach out to change the hearts of bullies. Our children need to read this poem! Happy New Year!
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January 8, 2020 at 3:33 AM
Thank you Sam for liking it..Happy New Year..
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December 1, 2019 at 8:05 AM
This is perfectly expressed. Sometimes a smile is a bridge.
Somadas Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 10:52 PM
Smile will heal hearts.. Thank you for your comments..
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November 19, 2019 at 8:28 AM
No idea how my comment on your poem about time machine got place under this poem....lol...some mix up there. Sorry I loved this poem being one of friendship above everything in life. Simply love the way you said it. Need of the hour.
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November 19, 2019 at 10:29 PM
Thank you..
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November 18, 2019 at 9:12 PM
Mind my friend , it's the time machine we all have. ..nicely put poem all can indentify with.... TKS for sharing.
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November 11, 2019 at 12:39 AM
Very profound poem Jenish. Takes a strong person with enormous courage and strong character (faith in themselves) to do that....into my favourites. Leanne
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November 11, 2019 at 1:58 AM
Thank you Leanne for your kind words..
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November 10, 2019 at 12:34 PM
Great approach to dealing with name-calling, Jenish! Good for you! ~ Gershon
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November 10, 2019 at 10:32 PM
Thank you...
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November 6, 2019 at 3:01 AM
Nicely written...
Salehi Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 12:58 AM
You are always welcome...
Somadas Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 4:06 AM
Thank you Pashang..
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November 4, 2019 at 8:36 AM
This is a great perspective. I enjoyed reading.
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November 4, 2019 at 10:48 PM
Thank you Juliet
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November 3, 2019 at 11:00 PM
This was very cool. Ann
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November 3, 2019 at 11:03 PM
Thank you Ann..
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November 3, 2019 at 5:34 AM
Im glad you sorted it out.. nice poem..
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November 3, 2019 at 6:45 AM
Thank you for breaking your silence..
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