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Enemy

John is one of my worst enemies! Kabir is also, he is bad! Raju is not at all better than them. I hate them all because they call me names. They are my enemies, they are my classmates So I faced them with a frowned face. One day I heard these famous words, Ringing in my ears as golden words. ‘Thou thyself art thy only friend, Thou thyself art thy only enemy, No other enemy but this self of mine, And no other friends other than me.’ I repeat these words a hundred times That made my heart calm as a lake. Next time when I saw them all I smiled at them, they returned the smile. We hug all together and call different names But we are not enemies, not anymore. Honorable Mention in STRAND SELECT 5 ,any form ,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 1/24/2020 10:58:00 AM
Congrats.... Very well expressed. God bless you.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/25/2020 12:15:00 AM
Thank you Pratap for liking my poem..Have a great day..
Date: 1/7/2020 9:50:00 PM
Sincere congratulations for your Honorable Mention in Brian's contest, Jenish - keep the ink flowing, my friend, and best wishes for a bountiful and healthy New Year. Blessings! :o)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/8/2020 3:34:00 AM
Thank you Gregory for your kind words.. Happy New Year..
Date: 1/7/2020 6:55:00 PM
Hi Jenish, Congratulations on your placement. It takes real courage to reach out to change the hearts of bullies. Our children need to read this poem! Happy New Year!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/8/2020 3:33:00 AM
Thank you Sam for liking it..Happy New Year..
Date: 12/1/2019 8:05:00 AM
This is perfectly expressed. Sometimes a smile is a bridge.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/1/2019 10:52:00 PM
Smile will heal hearts.. Thank you for your comments..
Date: 11/19/2019 8:28:00 AM
No idea how my comment on your poem about time machine got place under this poem....lol...some mix up there. Sorry I loved this poem being one of friendship above everything in life. Simply love the way you said it. Need of the hour.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/19/2019 10:29:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 11/18/2019 9:12:00 PM
Mind my friend , it's the time machine we all have. ..nicely put poem all can indentify with.... TKS for sharing.
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Date: 11/11/2019 12:39:00 AM
Very profound poem Jenish. Takes a strong person with enormous courage and strong character (faith in themselves) to do that....into my favourites. Leanne
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/11/2019 1:58:00 AM
Thank you Leanne for your kind words..
Date: 11/10/2019 12:34:00 PM
Great approach to dealing with name-calling, Jenish! Good for you! ~ Gershon
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/10/2019 10:32:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 11/6/2019 3:01:00 AM
Nicely written...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/19/2019 12:58:00 AM
You are always welcome...
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/6/2019 4:06:00 AM
Thank you Pashang..
Date: 11/4/2019 8:36:00 AM
This is a great perspective. I enjoyed reading.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/4/2019 10:48:00 PM
Thank you Juliet
Date: 11/3/2019 11:00:00 PM
This was very cool. Ann
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/3/2019 11:03:00 PM
Thank you Ann..
Date: 11/3/2019 5:34:00 AM
Im glad you sorted it out.. nice poem..
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/3/2019 6:45:00 AM
Thank you for breaking your silence..

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