Ends

The morning's tide of light filters through low-hanging branches
    outside the window
entering a room to spread across wrinkled skin
    covered in brown blotches
on the arms of an old man lying in a bed of shadows

the world inside his window is dim-lit and solemn
the world outside his window is bright and filled with life
    children loudly laughing, birds chirping
both bring a sense of peace and reflection
and are a nice distraction from the constant flood of memories
that drown his mind with too many thoughts of yesterday

in the light of dawn comes a stillness
    he embraces
as his days have grown tired and long
the day ends as the last light of life becomes frozen
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Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2025 at 11:43 AM
Excellent writing. I bet this scored high.
Cornish Avatar
January 16, 2025 at 8:43 AM
Frederic, those who read this will indeed momentarily freeze at the end - pondering their own mortality - you've set that stage wonderfully...
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2025 at 1:11 PM
- A peaceful death, Frederic - Lovely written - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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