Sharon Ruebel Poet Rhyme

Endless Walk

i walk the empty streets
where have all the people gone
perhaps they walk in different shoes
and sing to different songs

i walk the empty streets
no cobblers do i see
when first i came we all were game 
is anyone hearing me

i walk the empty streets
not even the rats retreat
no sign or sound resound
i find it quite profound

this place it has no glory
am i in purgatory
should i be at heavens gate
perhaps it is to late...

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Carolyn Devonshire March 11, 2011 at 2:43 PM The confusion is described so well, Sharon. It's hard to imagine "empty streets" such as those you describe. It's almost like something I once saw on Twilight Zone. You will find your way to heaven's gate, Sharon, but let's hope that we can have you here for many more years. Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico March 11, 2011 at 1:16 PM Very deep write fro my Friday afternoon Shar.. hope all is well and I always enjoy your work as you know already.. luv Michael