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Endless Pain

I could never have loved anyone the way I have loved you. Heart on Heart, facing life and death, just me and you. I could have followed you like your shadow, true love, I thought. Our Souls joined as one from the moment we met. With a promise of forever silently sealed. Even though our time was only a minute, it was enough to last all eternity, I thought. In my Kingdom of love, joy and tranquillity, an unexpected thunderstorm brought great sorrow. And in my memories, the comings and goings, day and night, took the desire to face the morrow. It pains me through and through to think all the joy and laughter were nothing more than an illusion. The head swirls like leaves in a whirlpool of uncertainty and confusion. “I will hold your hand forever, and together, we will enjoy life’s simple pleasures”, you said. Why did Faith douse the flicker from raging into a beautiful flame? Was I deliberately being misled? Or was it all just a game? Tears fell continuously like a heavy downpour of rain, Pictures of memorable moments captured, now soaked and destroyed, never to be seen again. The heart now lives in a broken dream wrapped in melancholy and utter despair. While the hollow shell of a tormented Soul lingers in an abyss, fighting with itself, refusing to accept that the rainbow of such a sweet love could suddenly disappear. by Zyrool

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Date: 7/3/2025 5:36:00 AM
This is so great and relatable!!The way all stanzas evoke so much emotion and have extended explainations that are all beautifully followed with imagery.Very nice
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 7/3/2025 7:41:00 AM
Hello Vivian, thank you so much for the read and your lovely words. Means a lot. Sending Blessings your way and wishing you a wonderful weekend.
Date: 4/24/2024 1:03:00 PM
Dear Zyrool, this is so sad and touching. It’s so well written and the endless pain is expressed with deep feelings throughout its lines. ‘ The hollow shell of a tormented soul lingers in an abyss’- so profound. ‘ The rainbow of such a sweet love could suddenly disappear’ is poignant. Days are clouded by much loss and grief but may the sun shine bright again. Blessings and smiles to you :):)
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/24/2024 8:34:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words and Blessings Christina, they really mean a lot. Wishing you the very best always,Zyrool.
Date: 4/22/2024 6:38:00 PM
It's a sad poem. May a future romance pan out better. I like this sad poem because of the beauty of its style and the realistic phrases. Thank you.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/23/2024 5:27:00 AM
Thank you for your support and kind words, much appreciated Hilda, my friend. Have a great rest of the week.

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