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Endless Moments

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the moments of children are endless until time intervenes imagination filled joy claims the light of day how small their world, and yet how vast their kingdom where the next thought is another minute of fun not escaping the world rather...living in it for all the happiness to come free from worry or concerns where responsibility is foreign and unknown and play, is there to be captured by creative imagination in their world of dreams when the mind of a child is unafraid to explore every thought, that freely flows, unrestrained from the burdens of failure a time to pass through, to be remembered when old when we were touched by the breath of God and called Angels 11/6/17 contest Photo Story...picture # 1

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Date: 12/2/2017 7:06:00 PM
Wonderful write, Frederic, especially the line, "when the mind of a child is unafraid" Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/7/2017 10:43:00 AM
Simply beautiful...
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Date: 11/6/2017 3:35:00 PM
this is absolutely fantastic. Oh gosh, I am seeing such good poems from this challenge. I don't even know how I will compete! One thing I will say about this childhood topic. I guess I am a Peter Pan who never grew up because even in my 60's, I am making almost every second be filled with as much fun as I can possibly get,and when I was a child, I was not even as imaginative as I am now(except for daydreaming a lot more!!) The ending of this poem is really good!!
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Date: 11/6/2017 11:31:00 AM
A true and accurate picture of childhood Frederic. Very deeply written. Having said that, i watched my grandchild spill water all over the living room floor then dance in it. lol, she's only two:)
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Date: 11/6/2017 11:21:00 AM
I love tis poem Frederic. Very well done :)
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Date: 11/6/2017 10:24:00 AM
Gorgeous pen Frederick :) ah I so miss being wee. xomo!
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