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Endless Journey

My smile 
Causes wind cries
Your heart 
beating fast
Your being 
Shattering us 
Am I beliving?
 

My tears
Touch your 
Soul
Ignite your 
humanity
Changes your 
Inner Destiny
And that is me 

My life
Fragments of 
Symbols
Uncompleted 
Puzzles
If and only if 
I depart ….
A new chapters unfolds
 
25/ jul/ 11
If this a poem then am dreaming

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/14/2012 8:18:00 AM
Lovely and sad.....very good Isa,I like it alot.oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/2/2012 5:47:00 AM
believing ? (typo). The brevity us this poem entices me to read it again and again. My fav is the middle stanza...ignites your humanity..changes your inner destiny..phew...that is sooo smooth. Very nice read for my morning cup of coffee. Will be back to read more. Like your contemporary style. Gwendolen
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Date: 7/26/2011 11:17:00 AM
"If and only if I depart, A new chapter unfolds" I liked this line! thanks for your nice comment, Isa :)
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Date: 7/26/2011 7:36:00 AM
It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning Isa. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your excellent work. Love, Carol
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