Endless Eve

velvet pitch curtain
pin points of light
adorn sable night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bird Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 11:00 AM
A wonderfully expressed haiku!
Kroeger Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 12:52 PM
I like it.. heheh
Gorelick Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 7:36 PM
Terrific..love it. BG sable night..wish I'd thought of that! BG
P. Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 6:25 AM
wonderful use of imagination!! well done... lovely haiku!! ~ Arany
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March 7, 2009 at 11:54 AM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Ehigiator Avatar
March 7, 2009 at 8:45 AM
Lovely Haiku, Creative-love the images you painted here(" pin points of life") Awesome, God Bless*Tyesha
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