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Endless Cycle of Rain

A rumble of thunder roars throughout the dark furious clouds. At dusk, grey sheets pour from the overly moistened southern sky. From the mount's tip to the green valley below humid thirst is quenched. The bolts' jagged streaks of energized light momentarily deny any shadows. Dawn breaks to overflowing pools of varying bluish hues. An orange solar heat extracts a gift of brew from the soaked wet land.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/21/2013 8:50:00 PM
you are good Debra, this is the reason I post very little,,, i don't have it in me to create such beauty in poems :-( :-( love the blueish hue, and the flowing light above it all.... xox~ Linda
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Date: 4/21/2013 7:50:00 AM
You have described the "water cycle" in such dramatic and lovely terms. Thank you for this wonderful imagery. I am delighted to read this.
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Date: 4/10/2013 2:36:00 PM
Love this write very well done. Beautiful It gives a great visual feeling for the storm.
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Date: 4/9/2013 5:32:00 PM
Great images! Nothing more soothing and thought provoking like a storm :)
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Date: 4/3/2013 8:26:00 AM
This is a lovely write..I fell in love with the imagery here.
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Date: 10/26/2012 7:42:00 AM
What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Debra. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX
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Date: 10/26/2012 2:49:00 AM
It sounds as you have visited the west coast of Norway .... We have a lot of rain .... very good poem Debra. - Have a nice day and a wonderful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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