Endless Car Rides

Seemingly endless car rides.
Screams for my sisters,
Shouts from my brothers,
And threats from my parents.
Finally arriving just to spend my entire day unpacking.
Dragged to the beach and forced to burn in the sun.
I hate vacation because of the feeling of being away from home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
June 21, 2026 at 10:31 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Mcguire Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 7:35 PM
Nice poem, I hope you come up for air!
Mcguire Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 7:31 PM
Interesting take. Good job, I feel your pain in this one.
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