Unseeking Seeker Poet Pantoum

Endless Ascent

Heart knows there’s more to us than this
Earth bound desires hold no allure
Scriptures speak of God’s light and bliss
Enabled, if our heart be pure

Earth bound desires hold no allure
We seek rapture that does not end
Enabled, if our heart be pure
God takes our hand and we ascend

We seek rapture that does not end 
Surrendering will, we are still
God takes our hand and we ascend
By His grace, voids within soon fill

Surrendering will, we are still
Bliss magnetism engulfs our form
By His grace, voids within soon fill
All we do, is with love conform

Bliss magnetism engulfs our form
We finally see who we are
All we do, is with love conform
We shine like a luminous star

We finally see who we are 
Scriptures speak of God’s light and bliss 
We shine like a luminous star
Heart knows there’s more to us than this

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Susan Ashley September 15, 2023 at 6:39 PM Dear Unseeking Seeker, your inspiring pantoum is deep, rich and beautifully expressed. Congratulations for your fine win in Gina's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Unseeking Seeker September 15, 2023 at 7:57 PM Thank you, dear Susan

Regina Mcintosh September 13, 2023 at 1:09 AM Yes, His light is an ever smiling joy, an abiding hope and a wonderful peace - love that will never cease. This is wonderful and wonderous. Just love it. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina Unseeking Seeker September 13, 2023 at 3:00 AM Thank you, dear Gina

Ink Empress September 3, 2023 at 7:01 AM I love “ heart knows theres more to this” excellent pantoum, flow and depth of this is impecabble Unseeking Seeker September 3, 2023 at 7:40 AM Thank you, IE :)

Silent One September 3, 2023 at 2:31 AM You've done this pantoum very well.. lovely message in this poem, and great use of words here.. it flows really well and the rhymes are on point... nice one! Unseeking Seeker September 3, 2023 at 3:20 AM Thank you, Silent One