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Endless Ascent

Heart knows there’s more to us than this Earth bound desires hold no allure Scriptures speak of God’s light and bliss Enabled, if our heart be pure Earth bound desires hold no allure We seek rapture that does not end Enabled, if our heart be pure God takes our hand and we ascend We seek rapture that does not end Surrendering will, we are still God takes our hand and we ascend By His grace, voids within soon fill Surrendering will, we are still Bliss magnetism engulfs our form By His grace, voids within soon fill All we do, is with love conform Bliss magnetism engulfs our form We finally see who we are All we do, is with love conform We shine like a luminous star We finally see who we are Scriptures speak of God’s light and bliss We shine like a luminous star Heart knows there’s more to us than this

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Date: 9/15/2023 6:39:00 PM
Dear Unseeking Seeker, your inspiring pantoum is deep, rich and beautifully expressed. Congratulations for your fine win in Gina's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/15/2023 7:57:00 PM
Thank you, dear Susan
Date: 9/13/2023 1:09:00 AM
Yes, His light is an ever smiling joy, an abiding hope and a wonderful peace - love that will never cease. This is wonderful and wonderous. Just love it. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 9/13/2023 3:00:00 AM
Thank you, dear Gina
Date: 9/3/2023 7:01:00 AM
I love “ heart knows theres more to this” excellent pantoum, flow and depth of this is impecabble
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Date: 9/3/2023 7:40:00 AM
Thank you, IE :)
Date: 9/3/2023 2:31:00 AM
You've done this pantoum very well.. lovely message in this poem, and great use of words here.. it flows really well and the rhymes are on point... nice one!
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Date: 9/3/2023 3:20:00 AM
Thank you, Silent One

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