Audrey Haick Poet Haiku

Endless Admiration

kissing golden sands         
in endless admiration
accursed by the moon

a sweet surrender
caught in stoic web of time
joy reigns eternal

waves hug sand
sweetly serenades 
‘Would you be my valentine?’
~*~
For PD's sponsored contest: "(Double) Haiku and  One Questionku"
01/30/13

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Skat A December 3, 2015 at 1:16 AM Annalise, lovely haiku, Enjoyed. SKAT

Andrea Dietrich February 19, 2013 at 8:51 PM Congratulations, Annalise, for your well deserved win. I remember this one well!!

Olusegun Arowolo February 17, 2013 at 3:53 PM Beautiful piece,great friend.Congratulations on your superb win in this comtest.And thanks for stopping by my poems and for your comments.

Francine Roberts February 16, 2013 at 11:18 PM just lovely, many congrats on your win in the contest Annalise

Joseph May February 16, 2013 at 7:25 PM congrats on a great win Annalise

Poet Destroyer A February 16, 2013 at 1:57 PM ANNALISE, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA

Sean L Sanders January 31, 2013 at 5:48 AM Wow, thats all I'll say. I'm still litsenning.

Andrea Dietrich January 30, 2013 at 10:37 PM Very nice, Annalise. Now I know why I am seeing these two haiku/questionku poems. I did not realize there was a contest for them but you were good enough to mention that at the bottom of your entry. PD will be so pleased with yours.