ending

in evening mist
a tattered web 
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			p
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		  r
		     a
		  l
			s
into its ending
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Miller Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 3:38 AM
Just love this creative haiku
Fowler Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 10:04 AM
Thanks so much Terry. I hope all is well with you. :)
Kauffman Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 12:09 PM
What wonderful metamorphic imagery, Linda! Love the formatting that so vividly expresses the image of the dying web! Thank you for this visual beauty. Blessings of autumn joy to you!
Fowler Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 11:11 AM
Hey Sam. I appreciate your visit. Many thanks for such kind and encouraging words! All blessings! :)
Daniels Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 10:46 PM
Etheric imagery, Linda ! Love the formatting of spirals & how it ends, like all spirals do. Thankyou for visiting my poem too. Love & Blessings.xx.
Fowler Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 11:10 AM
Very kind of you Ghairo. Life spirals into its endings, "like all spirals do". Thank you! :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:52 PM
nicely done...! enjoyed the metaphorical nature of your poem...best wishes in the contest.
Fowler Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 7:57 AM
Many thanks Sara. This type of haiku is called a jisei, I believe. I haven't quite gotten the hang of it yet, but I'm working on it. :)
Hind Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:09 PM
This is deep, Linda. ...but oh!!
Fowler Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 7:56 AM
Hi Paige. Glad to elicit an 'oh' from you. Thank you. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 11:30 AM
What a creative/fun write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away.........
Fowler Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 7:54 AM
Glad you enjoyed it dear Paula. :)
Andresen Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 10:16 AM
- Lovely haiku, Linda :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 7:54 AM
Thank you and big hugs Anne-Lise. :)
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