End Times Ii

We all want to go
to heaven, but no one wants
to die to get there.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Winter Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 4:33 PM
WOW. AWESOME. soup mail : )) xoxo
Dufresne Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 6:08 PM
funny well done Senryu. Robert
Kendrick Avatar
January 8, 2010 at 5:29 AM
Oh, to be caught up in the rapture and cheat old man death. Maybe soon He will come with the trump sound. Very well presented. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Tilford Avatar
January 6, 2010 at 4:57 PM
Wonderful!! Def a fav.
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2010 at 1:46 PM
I think a few people want to die, but it's true, I sure don't. Also, (some are afraid to die becuase it isn't heaven they are going to) Good one, Sue, and thanks for your sweet comment to me! Nice to meet you here. Andrea
Kelly Avatar
January 6, 2010 at 1:29 PM
So , live life to the endddddddd , Sue . Great call ...
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January 6, 2010 at 1:23 PM
So true. You've got me smiling with this one. Keep on writing and sharing with us! Karen
Goff Avatar
January 6, 2010 at 12:41 PM
am smilin! jimbo
Richards Avatar
January 6, 2010 at 12:38 PM
This packs a punch!!!! No words were ever so true!! :) Love, Carrie
George   Avatar
January 6, 2010 at 12:24 PM
lol! Toooooooo Cooooooooooool You made my day. Thanks Sue. Lainie
Orozco Avatar
January 6, 2010 at 9:58 AM
no one is promised heaven, even if you die. Good write, really made me think_ edward
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