End of the Tunnel

Hearts writhing in pain and wounds that smell 
Souls smoldering in agony and affliction’s hell

O savior! O Love! You are hard to seek in this age of apathy
            Let there be light at the end of the tunnel

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/18/2011 8:00:00 AM
Your few words bring to mind the state we put ourselves in and the wondering if God still hears our disobedient voice. Needs to be pasted over my bed as a reminder!
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Date: 11/11/2011 5:29:00 PM
Such an inspiring write, Mohammad. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 11/12/2011 6:55:00 PM
Thanks, Caryl for your heart warming comments. You are so kind. -Mohammad
Date: 10/29/2011 1:16:00 PM
keeping our eyes on HIM there is always light at the end of the tunnel in this life Mohammad.. beautiful and inspiring words of poetic art luv..
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/29/2011 6:46:00 PM
Thanks for your uplifting comments Linda. I am touched by the feelings expressed. -Mohammad
Date: 10/28/2011 8:21:00 AM
Thank you for your always kind comments on my writing Mohammad. It is a pleasure to read your poetry this fine day. Hoping you have an amazing weekend. Love, Carol
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/29/2011 6:48:00 PM
I am grateful to you. A poet of your calibre admiring my work is ample reward for me. -Mohammad
Date: 8/20/2011 10:27:00 AM
God is truly the lighting force,Mohammed.Nicely penned too.
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 8/20/2011 1:00:00 PM
Thanks for your kind feelings, Fabiyas. This is what I am talking about in my Quatrain -sharing of love. Regards. -Mohammad
Date: 8/19/2011 1:09:00 PM
And praise to our God, there will be, Mohammad! For He hears our plea for peace. Our spirits groan along with nature and He hears, I am sure. Love, Mohammad
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 8/20/2011 12:47:00 PM
Thanks Annalise for your sympathetic comment on my Quatrain. I agree with you that in times of despair one must evoke God. There is no denying from this fact. However, as a human being we will fail in our duty to mankind if we don't give our love to the afflicted as is shown by Jesus. -Mohammad
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