End of the Tunnel

Hearts writhing in pain and wounds that smell 
Souls smoldering in agony and affliction’s hell

O savior! O Love! You are hard to seek in this age of apathy
            Let there be light at the end of the tunnel
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
December 18, 2011 at 8:00 AM
Your few words bring to mind the state we put ourselves in and the wondering if God still hears our disobedient voice. Needs to be pasted over my bed as a reminder!
Muzzey Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 5:29 PM
Such an inspiring write, Mohammad. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
Yamin Avatar
November 12, 2011 at 6:55 PM
Thanks, Caryl for your heart warming comments. You are so kind. -Mohammad
Sweetheart Avatar
October 29, 2011 at 1:16 PM
keeping our eyes on HIM there is always light at the end of the tunnel in this life Mohammad.. beautiful and inspiring words of poetic art luv..
Yamin Avatar
October 29, 2011 at 6:46 PM
Thanks for your uplifting comments Linda. I am touched by the feelings expressed. -Mohammad
Brown Avatar
October 28, 2011 at 8:21 AM
Thank you for your always kind comments on my writing Mohammad. It is a pleasure to read your poetry this fine day. Hoping you have an amazing weekend. Love, Carol
Yamin Avatar
October 29, 2011 at 6:48 PM
I am grateful to you. A poet of your calibre admiring my work is ample reward for me. -Mohammad
M V Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 10:27 AM
God is truly the lighting force,Mohammed.Nicely penned too.
Yamin Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 1:00 PM
Thanks for your kind feelings, Fabiyas. This is what I am talking about in my Quatrain -sharing of love. Regards. -Mohammad
Haick Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 1:09 PM
And praise to our God, there will be, Mohammad! For He hears our plea for peace. Our spirits groan along with nature and He hears, I am sure. Love, Mohammad
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August 20, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Thanks Annalise for your sympathetic comment on my Quatrain. I agree with you that in times of despair one must evoke God. There is no denying from this fact. However, as a human being we will fail in our duty to mankind if we don't give our love to the afflicted as is shown by Jesus. -Mohammad
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