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Written, September 5, 2024
For the Contest, “Trimeric, 2”
Sponsor, Janice Canerdy

I witnessed this a few days ago while walking along a beach in NJ.

End Of The Season

They gather on the sandy shore-
confused and squawking as they stray.
Their former meals are seen no more;
from side to side, they look each way.

Confused and squawking as they stray
upon the rolling, barren sand;
held in dismay, they sadly stand.

Their former meals are seen no more;
the end-of-summer season came-
and nothing seems to be the same.

From side to side, they look each way.
The crowd with crumbs of food- not there.
The hungry seagulls stand and stare.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 10/12/2024 2:44:00 AM
Seagulls get spoilt in the summer when the beaches are crowded and food is easily available! I truly enjoyed this poem, Sandra, and yours is definitely a merited win...congratulations!! Regards // paul
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Date: 10/6/2024 2:17:00 PM
Sandra, a huge CONGRATS on your well-deserved win in my contest. Delightful trimeric! Janice
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Date: 9/6/2024 5:13:00 PM
Too funny! They have an eyewitness to their plight!
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