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BONSOIR

- End of the Road -


The memories can tell us what we were and what we became
We passed the fields in rain and sunshine
I wish I could say that life was perfect
It grew weeds in our garden, not everything was easy
The important thing is not where you are, but where you are going
On our journey there became so much more

Millions of footprints with valued prize
Sorrow and tears but never sad goodbye
Our smiles and happiness makes me love you more
I gave you my heart, could not love anyone but you
We lived, now we have come to the end of the road
God's garden is beautiful, let us sit here until the sun goes down









18.03.2016
A-L Andresen :)
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Barchettadrive Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 3:21 PM
Such a happy poem.... Such a sad poem. Either way can draw tears Anne! Here's to hoping your sky is full of stars tonight!!!
Andresen Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 3:31 PM
- Thank you for visits and lovely comments, Red :) - .... Too much clouds :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bankson Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 11:58 AM
Love it,great write as always,Dig the picture,perfect combination... Jai
Andresen Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 1:12 PM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Jai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Parmale Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 12:21 PM
Only pure heart can reflect such beautiful feelings dear A_L...So so so sweet!!!
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 2:08 PM
- Anand, thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sewe Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 3:07 AM
Great write Anne.... with love there is no going back only hanging in there.. lovely poem
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 1:54 PM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Brandy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bear Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 12:48 PM
How lovely Nice way to explain love and the end of our lives. Loved it Hugs Edith
Andresen Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 12:51 PM
- Great love, Edith :) - Thank you for visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 3:45 PM
Beautiful write Anne...love endures to the end..
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 4:04 PM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 2:00 PM
I love that picture and how you wrote of it in your poem. SWEET!
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 2:16 PM
- I found the perfect picture after I had written the poem, Andrea - Thank you for visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 1:06 PM
such beauty and enchantment at the end of the road, anne... lovely read this sunday!.. huggs and happy week!
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 1:16 PM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 11:56 AM
Filled with sweet memories and expecting lovely life in God's garden after the end of the road. Wonderful thoughts expressed with soft artistic pen with lovely picture. Loved always my lovely lovely friend, bl
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 12:41 PM
- Bl, thank you for visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Terano Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 9:26 AM
heart warming. Very heart warming. Thank you.
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 12:41 PM
- Vic, thank you for visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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March 20, 2016 at 9:25 AM
We lived, now we have come to the end of the road God's garden is beautiful, let us sit here until the sun goes down" In these concluding beautiful lines you have touched the mind and heart both dear friend. But why the end of the Road Anne? Keep hopes till the last moment and enjoy every moment as a precious gift of God. Hope to see your next poem soon. With all best wishes for a Happy Easter ....Ravindra K Kapoor
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March 20, 2016 at 12:40 PM
- Ravindra, thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hicks Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 11:23 PM
The ending sounds nearly as sweet as the beginning ... if the life is well lived, perhaps this is so. Positive and reflective work, Anne.
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 6:18 AM
- Timothy, thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 7:17 PM
A lovely contemplative write.
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 6:17 AM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 3:36 PM
Such a lovely poem which speaks volumes, Anne Lise! I like how you describe this life journey where love keeps two people close to each other for so many years. But you are not yet at the end of the road....may you enjoy many more years together:) Hugs ~~ paul
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March 19, 2016 at 3:51 PM
- "The important thing is not where you are, but where you are going" - Thank you for the beautiful words, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dunn Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 1:52 PM
Dear Anne Lise This is totally one of my favorites from you, memorable for all time, love it's strength of the spirit you've done an exceptional job on this piece, cheri
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 2:39 PM
- Cherl, thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - Always a pleasure to see you my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Warrior Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 9:35 AM
A memorable write Anne Lise...hugs ()()()()...god bless...^WW^
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 2:37 PM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Winged :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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March 19, 2016 at 8:12 AM
Age is not A barrier and it never was.... Your poem is very insightful and emotionally powerful... 7/7
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 8:57 AM
- Thank you for visits a 7 and comments, Red :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 6:46 PM
What a lovely ode to those elderly couples we see still holding hands.
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 6:01 AM
- Great love :) - Thank you for visits and comments, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 4:07 PM
I like this poem very much. The very first line is a eye grabber. "Sorrow and tears but never sad goodbye" very touching and authentic. I think it's A7. Peace young lady:)
Turner Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 4:21 PM
It's perfect. No need to change anything.:):)
Andresen Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 4:16 PM
- Thank you very much, Daniel - I got so unsure by the first comments... if this was a "good" poem ..... I know my English is not perfect - My heart smiles :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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