End of the Line

Some say it's fine, throwing caution to the wind.
    Some say it's fine, if you're good or may have sinned.
    Some say it's fine, giving all to ease your task.
    Some say it's fine, to help but don't wait to ask.

    You may while away each day, waiting for a call.
    Hoping for some news, about anything at all.
    Just gazing into space, or staring at the wall.
    Or just having a ball.

    12/ 16/ 2017.
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Lamoureux Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 4:52 PM
lots of wisdom here. Congrats!
Hamilton Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 4:28 PM
Nice one George, congrats on a fine placement!
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 5:52 AM
Well said George, Some folks are happy just to sit there and wait for something to happen. You can go on waiting and waiting but things won't change unless you break free of the cycle and make a move:-) hugs jan xx
Michael Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 5:31 AM
Some say it's fine... to take a lifetime to unwind...Enjoyed your poem, George...All the best
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