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End of October

October
Mowing over
Buy blower
Flame thrower
Leaves smolder
Smoky odor
Feeling bolder
Getting older

written on a gloomy, rainy
day, October 25, 2021

Copyright © L Milton Hankins | Year Posted 2021

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 10/28/2021 9:29:00 PM In but a few words you honor autumn Login to Reply L Milton Hankins Date: 10/29/2021 9:50:00 AM I thought you might like this one, Caren. I was in an experimental mood.

Delice Arleen Skelly Date: 10/27/2021 2:14:00 AM Atmospheric piece Milt..Delice Login to Reply L Milton Hankins Date: 10/27/2021 9:08:00 AM Thanks, Delice. Does that mean it was far out????

Shirley Hawkins Date: 10/25/2021 6:28:00 PM Felt the atmosphere, smelt the smoke. Loved it, Thank you... Login to Reply L Milton Hankins Date: 10/25/2021 7:31:00 PM I'm glad you loved it, Shirley. It was sort of experimental for me.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/25/2021 4:02:00 PM oh I love this succinct monorhyme. It's just perfect. Login to Reply L Milton Hankins Date: 10/25/2021 7:31:00 PM Thanks, Andrea. That's quite a compliment coming from you.

Virginia Gelok Date: 10/25/2021 12:23:00 PM You just painted the picture we have here in my little town. Darn! Yes, it's gloomy here as well. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. Login to Reply L Milton Hankins Date: 10/25/2021 12:31:00 PM Aw, Virginia, you'll never know how much I always appreciate your kind thoughts. We just have to chin up!

Gershon Wolf Date: 10/25/2021 11:34:00 AM I like what you've done here better than a footle. It's so much richer with three-four syllables, and yet it's got that footle beat to it. Lovely done, Milt! ~ Gershon Login to Reply L Milton Hankins Date: 10/25/2021 12:32:00 PM I noticed, too, that it had a footle beat. It was quite experimental on my part, as I'm used to writing the longer line. I'm glad you enjoyed it, gw. Appreciate you.

John Lawless Date: 10/25/2021 11:05:00 AM pretty much sums it up Milt...bring on the feathered feast Login to Reply L Milton Hankins Date: 10/25/2021 12:05:00 PM Thanks, John. I appreciate your comment on my little experiment here.