end of a long day

surge of a shower, urgently nudging the suds to roll off shoulder
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Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 2:21 PM
Very nice. Love this.
Baker Avatar
December 2, 2023 at 6:57 PM
It is quite the release after a long day. You said it all in one line, Kim. Kudos! my friend. Bill
Hind Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 9:03 PM
I liked the irony and enjoyed reading!
One Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 11:03 AM
Great one liner Kim... Vivid imagery in only a few words.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 6:19 PM
Thank you! :)
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