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end of a long day

surge of a shower, urgently nudging the suds to roll off shoulder

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 12/3/2023 2:21:00 PM
Very nice. Love this.
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Date: 12/2/2023 6:57:00 PM
It is quite the release after a long day. You said it all in one line, Kim. Kudos! my friend. Bill
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Date: 12/1/2023 9:03:00 PM
I liked the irony and enjoyed reading!
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Date: 12/1/2023 11:03:00 AM
Great one liner Kim... Vivid imagery in only a few words.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2023 6:19:00 PM
Thank you! :)

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