end of a long day

surge of a shower, urgently nudging the suds to roll off shoulder

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/3/2023 2:21:00 PM

Very nice. Love this.

Bill Baker

Date: 12/2/2023 6:57:00 PM

It is quite the release after a long day. You said it all in one line, Kim. Kudos! my friend. Bill

Paige Hind

Date: 12/1/2023 9:03:00 PM

I liked the irony and enjoyed reading!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/1/2023 3:50:00 PM

fabulous, Kim. I always need the feel of the surge of a warm shower at the end of any day. Well said! Liked your one-liner! Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2023 6:20:00 PM

akin to letting problems roll off your shoulder :) Thank you!

Silent One

Date: 12/1/2023 11:03:00 AM

Great one liner Kim... Vivid imagery in only a few words.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2023 6:19:00 PM

Thank you! :)