Sean Kelly Poet Light Verse

End Line : Oh For a Smile .

Some , believe that rich folk have made    ... IT

And never need worry about what a thing  ....COSTS

Sadly , many of these people have absolutely..NOTHING

Except the trappings ,  which  they  cling     ... TO

Poor me ,with just a fun pen and a readymade ..SMILE .



Inspired for D-A end line contest by Iolanda's humour blog .

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Andrea Dietrich October 25, 2011 at 11:39 PM Yep, here is another one I recall. Let me go a little farther back.

Eamon Duffin January 8, 2011 at 7:02 AM Hi Sean. Time now for a bit of reading as work is scarce. Great piece this and cleverly done. Eamon

Brian Strand May 5, 2010 at 7:24 AM Trust your smile has returned after the disappointing result in France ,at least in consolation Rory broke his duck in the USA.For us yesterday a dubliner and the rain saved the day in the WI .Clearly its not only here that rain can ruin a World Tournament.Thanks for your kind comments Sean.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 11, 2010 at 6:24 AM I love this one. Soupmail

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 24, 2010 at 12:19 PM For someone who says this is his least favorite form of poetry.. u have done it proud Sean.. good luck in the contest.. my entry is Fairy Tales.. appreciate your comments on my blog and OH that lovely little limerick poem too.. will treasure it Sean.. thankxxx... appreciate your input.. very valued.. luv.. "Sweetheart" of P.S.

Andrea Dietrich February 22, 2010 at 9:31 PM I think this is one of the better end line entries, Sean. Very well done! andrea

Brian Strand February 21, 2010 at 8:17 AM Not much if you are watching Johno's 15 especially if you have paid to be there.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Iolanda Scripca February 19, 2010 at 1:27 AM Thank you for your comment on my blog "Humor in Poetry"

David Byrne February 17, 2010 at 8:30 PM but wait until you are published and filthy rich!

February 17, 2010 at 3:23 PM And you have me smiling with you. Nice message in this End Line Word poem. I'm sure HG and Dane Ann will love it. I hope this form takes off. It would be fun to have it added to the Soup form list. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire February 17, 2010 at 9:43 AM Some of the richest people don't seem to know how to smile. Obviously, material wealth cannot bring us the type of joy that a "fun pen" can! Excellent end-line poem, Sean. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Brian Strand February 17, 2010 at 1:29 AM Well you certainly achieve that here Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & valued kind words

Charmaine Chircop February 16, 2010 at 3:42 PM That readymade smile is worth much more than gold..lovely poem and tnks for your kind comments:)Charma

Carrie Richards February 16, 2010 at 8:09 AM You have the gift to make the rest of us smile as well !! ....see?...I'm smiling, :)

Susan Palli February 16, 2010 at 4:12 AM thnks for your comment, i giggled

Susan Palli February 16, 2010 at 3:57 AM very clever and profound, thanks

Anthony Nutter February 16, 2010 at 2:44 AM This made me smile nice write