End It

The dead and the living
I would fall between
I am not dead yet can't seem to live
Does anyone understand this??

Can't seem to make things right
All I do is turn it worse
Wanting to correct my life
But too many mistakes to fix

Oh someone please just shoot me
Take your car and run me over
End this pain I feel forever
Shut my life closed with one final strike
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 29, 2009 at 3:04 PM
I feel the emotion in your write but you can turn things around. Well done when your writing touches someone you have done an excellent job.
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