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End Ego


"Three
stands for 
Trinity-
Generator,
Operator, Destroyer - GOD. I am 
the greatest number". Number three boasted.
Zero humbly
said, "I am 
nothing
but 
when 
I am
alongside,
value goes up.
All have own uniqueness. End your ego."

February 2021
Syllable count checked at HMS

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/17/2021 11:58:00 PM

A well composed and inspirational Tetractys Rama. Best wishes ~ Belle

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/18/2021 2:21:00 AM

Thanks :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/17/2021 4:50:00 PM

Very nicely constructed, winning wishes being sent Rama, Blessing from my heart too.

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/18/2021 2:22:00 AM

Thanks for the wishes and heartfelt thanks for the blessings. God bless! Take care Rama

Judy Ball

Date: 2/17/2021 9:50:00 AM

Oh Well Said Rama. To be truly great you must first humble yourself. Jesus washed the feet of His Apostles. Nicely done. A fave for me. God Bless, JB

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/17/2021 10:24:00 AM

He who is most knowledgeable is most humble I have seen it. Jesus washed the feet of his Apostles because he saw God in all. Thanks for the fave. Have a blessed day ahead Judy. Take care Rama

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/17/2021 7:37:00 AM

So creative and clever, Rama. Janice

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/17/2021 7:45:00 AM

Thanks Janice. Couldn't think of anything else for the contest. Have a wonderful day ahead. Take care Rama

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/17/2021 6:06:00 AM

This is so clever, Rama, the imagery unique. Love it.

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/17/2021 6:29:00 AM

Such a wonderful compliment from a master of imagery makes my day. Thanks a ton. Take care Rama

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/17/2021 6:03:00 AM

WoW!Rama, This is a good take on the contest theme. I found it to deep and thought provoking. Best wishes in the contest.Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/17/2021 6:33:00 AM

Thanks Alexis. Was not wanting to participate, what to write on number 3 suddenly this idea cropped up. Thanks for your positive comments. You too enjoy your day. Take care, Rama