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Encumbrance of a Burden

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How much does your burden weigh? Simmering anger bottled up, an acid that corrodes the soul. Release it, not on someone, of course. If it's rage, shout it into the void! Unexpressed hurt? Give a voice to it, at last! Consider the source; turn to a caring friend who'll apply a healing balm to your emotional wounds If you want to cry, don't hold it in, permit the emotion. Wail out a good cry! You'd be surprised how you feel afterwards. Those bothersome thoughts occupying your mind like fetid waste; a threat to your peace of mind Release them like I do, through meditation; lighten the weight of the burdens you carry so you can finally breathe and be... free. Woozah!... Submitted for... Catharsis Poetry Contest (Winner: 3rd Place) Sponsored by Silent One Date written: 12/03/2020

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Date: 12/12/2020 6:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Edward!!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/12/2020 11:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Mark:-)
Date: 12/11/2020 2:50:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/11/2020 7:00:00 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)
Date: 12/10/2020 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/10/2020 10:32:00 AM
Thank you so much for my placement, SO!:-) Most obliged.
Date: 12/3/2020 4:45:00 AM
A graceful entry, Edward, with a great suggestion for purgation of emotions: meditation!!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/3/2020 6:51:00 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Newton:-) Most obliged.

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