Karen Jones Poet Rhyme

Encouraging Black Bird

I can white write more
But I fight to write less
What can I sandy say 
That hasn’t been said

By other poets more great
Or silver stoics seeking soul
Bored blue with my poems today
Despite neon nite my mind unfolds

But then I get soupmail from you
Poetic sky once grey becomes blue
Is it your praise or faith in word
That cinnamon celebrates being heard
So thank you little black bird

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Jan Allison July 10, 2024 at 9:26 AM aww Karen I know how you feel to get an encouraging soup mail and how it lifts your spirits, Your mail to me today sure made me fly high - write on sweet lady! hugs jan xx Karen Jones July 10, 2024 at 11:55 AM Jan thanks for your inspiring soup mails and wonderful comments! Hugs back beautiful soul!

Mike Gentile July 10, 2024 at 4:29 AM I am happy that a little bird gave you encouragement ! We all need a little here and there! Keep on writing Karen!! Happy Wednesday xxoo Karen Jones July 10, 2024 at 5:13 AM Thanks for your black bird comments too Mike! Hugs

Victor Buhagiar July 10, 2024 at 1:22 AM Write, don't stop or you will end like me. I have ideas but I have a block. Karen Jones July 10, 2024 at 5:12 AM So sorry you have a block but write anyway or free write to flush ideas out! I am writing now without ideas kinda like off the top of my head! It’s frightening lol as I mentioned before in another poem my pc died and I feel stunted by using only my iPhone! Hugs dear Victor!