Encouraged

I tried a mono rhyme,
but ended up with mumps;
I tried a nursery rhyme,
but mother goose got bumps.
Just when you cinqku got it,
you choka big one down.
Your ode is not so epic;
that rondel won’t come ‘round.
I tanka guy I met here,
Encouraged verse d’light.
Haikudos on your placement;
What I Believe’s just right.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Pandit Avatar
December 30, 2022 at 5:55 AM
A wonderful wordplay on forms. Cleverly done, Jeff.
Kyser Avatar
December 30, 2022 at 7:19 AM
Thanks, Vijay - have a wonderful day!
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