Funom Makama Poet Quatrain

Encounter To Forget

After thirty stares, he walks to the lady to impress, being a hip hop guy
he has recently not seen one this beautiful, confident, calm but not shy.
She counters his marvelous lines with: "I'm fifty-one years old."
and comforts him immediately with: "you're too young to be this bold."

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by  L MILTON HANKINS
Published on the 8th. August. 2021

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Anselmo Boles November 7, 2021 at 4:48 PM A very clever and funny rendering of an idea. Perfectly laid out. Great job Funom!...ab Funom Makama November 10, 2021 at 10:06 AM Thank you so much Anselmo

Silpika Kalita October 11, 2021 at 7:54 PM Hey Funom! A beautiful one on couplet. I absolutely love the title, the subtle sequence of the lines! Great pen! Funom Makama November 10, 2021 at 10:06 AM Thank you so much Silpika