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Into the pool of dreams Which lay placid, You dived. Rippled away my inspidity, Causing movements of life. Every drop that ran on you, Slowly wiped by your hand, Scented the waves, of my mind. Your touch, Colored my soul Of sky. Your love, sweetened waters That sprung from My heart Which flowed Back into pool, in loops, Encircling you forever!

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Date: 5/30/2017 10:53:00 AM
Nice lines ,and congrats for contest winner
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Murali Mohana Gowda
Date: 5/30/2017 9:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Shreastha!
Date: 5/30/2017 7:12:00 AM
Congrats Murali, for your well-deserved first placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Murali Mohana Gowda
Date: 5/30/2017 8:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Teddy!
Date: 5/29/2017 2:42:00 PM
Murali, congratulations on your top win with lovely, romantic poem! Janice
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Murali Mohana Gowda
Date: 5/29/2017 9:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice!
Date: 5/29/2017 2:41:00 PM
Murali, congratulations on your top win with lovely, romantic poem! Janice
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Murali Mohana Gowda
Date: 5/29/2017 9:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice!
Date: 5/29/2017 1:56:00 PM
Great write and great placement!!:)
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Murali Mohana Gowda
Date: 5/29/2017 9:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jeremy!

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