Linda-Marie Sweetheart Poet Rhyme

Enchantment-Duo-Rhyme

  "Enchantment - Duo-Rhyme"


brilliant beams of Sunlight cascade
to orange aura marmalade

enhancing love while blooming new
beneath cream skies of patent blue
sprinkling words sweet as dawning's dew
two turtledoves in wings which coo
fond melodies caress adieu'
in magic moments rendezvous
frolicked in fields of heather's hue
fake hearts faded to vapor's view

soft silver stars shed tears parade
enchanted moonlight mist charade'.

*For Andrea Dietrich's Duo-Rhyme Contest

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Skat A March 13, 2014 at 2:05 AM a beautiful poem, ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

Sara Kendrick August 10, 2012 at 1:39 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown August 9, 2012 at 10:45 AM A well deserved placement for you in the Duo-Rhyme contest. Congratulations Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders August 5, 2012 at 12:52 PM Such an enchanting write, Linda-Marie! Just beautiful!! Congrats on another wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Joseph May August 4, 2012 at 10:54 AM congrats on your win Linda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 4, 2012 at 8:58 AM WON 4th place ... thankxxx..

Debbie Guzzi August 4, 2012 at 6:32 AM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 4, 2012 at 4:01 AM Congratulations Carrie on a well deserved win.xx

David Williams August 4, 2012 at 2:21 AM Linda-Marie congrats on your win, just love it....David

Connie Marcum Wong August 4, 2012 at 12:26 AM Congratulations on this colorful and indeed enchanting piece garner a well deserved win. I hope you are feeling much better soon. Blessings

Carrie Richards August 3, 2012 at 7:33 PM As always, just beautiful in every line! Lovely poem, Linda Marie! Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich August 3, 2012 at 7:02 PM How are you feeling today, by the way?

Andrea Dietrich August 3, 2012 at 7:01 PM Linda, you sure had a lot of savory lines in this poem. Enchanting as its title!! My favorite was "cream skies of patent blue!" and the marmalade line too. Thanks for coming up with such a sweet example of Duo rhyme for my contest and Big congrats on your win. Luv, Andrea

Jack Horne July 16, 2012 at 12:55 PM what a beautiful piece - Andrea will love it

Michael J. Falotico July 13, 2012 at 8:53 PM Very beautiful. Oh I didn't know you had a concussion. Wow , I hope your well. :•( very sad to hear this. Wishing you good Heath. Luv n hugs Michael. Ps please rest and get be better.

Tanya Harrington July 13, 2012 at 1:39 PM Oh so beautiful! I float in clouded skies to watch this work come alive! :) Tanya p.s. I do hope you are feeling better!

Robert Pettit July 12, 2012 at 2:50 PM You have supplied an excellent example of what Andrea is looking for in her contest. This is very well written.

Sara Kendrick July 12, 2012 at 2:28 PM Reads like winning work..Good luck in the contest...Thanks for stopping by..We are all fair..Doris has her lasar surgery next week..My husband is facing spinal surgery again..Sara

Cory Long July 12, 2012 at 5:20 AM You have a way with words buddy loved it! cory

Carrie Richards July 11, 2012 at 7:16 PM As always, a beautiful poem from you, that isn't always easy when trying a new form! Nicely done, Linda Marie!

Kim Merryman July 11, 2012 at 5:25 PM A lovely write, Linda-Marie. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

Phyllis Babcock July 11, 2012 at 4:36 PM Did not see that Andrea had a contest going. Good luck in the contest. Just wanted to check in and see how you are feeling. Hope all is well. love phyl

Carol Sunshine Brown July 11, 2012 at 1:34 PM It was such a pleasure to read your poetry today Linda-Marie and the best to you in Andrea's contest. I hope to be able in the next few weeks to find the time and energy to read and comment. May you walk through the garden of inspiration and continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey July 11, 2012 at 11:26 AM You have yet again created an atomically radiant write my friend! I really enjoyed the awesomeness, the powerful words of your incredible poem! Thank you for sharing this illustrious piece of art Linda-Marie! Terrific poem, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 11, 2012 at 9:46 AM You have a beautiful poem here Linda-Marie....sweet as marmalade...super rhyme...luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise

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