Nette Onclaud Poet Quintain (English)

Enchantment In Five Lines

Oh, garden of exotic night

    my flesh inhales its luscious tunes;

      when summer drifts, raw blooms excite

  kisses wild as the lilting moon,

      enchanting July’s glazed festoon!



Sara Kendrick's Five Lines/ Metaphors And Simile
6/25/2015

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Skat A June 30, 2015 at 10:47 PM Nette Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**

Andrea Dietrich June 29, 2015 at 10:17 PM this is FANTABULOUS!! Congrats, dearie

Eve Roper June 29, 2015 at 6:35 PM Nette, congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve

Sara Kendrick June 29, 2015 at 5:33 PM Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Way to go with this win..Congrats..Thanks for your participation..Sara

Matthew Anish June 28, 2015 at 4:27 PM Sounds like you really enjoy summer. It has finally arrived! Nice write! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Paul Callus June 27, 2015 at 2:10 PM Delightful metaphors and similes; enchanting offering! richly appealing and seductive! a winner it shall be:) hugs // paul

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 26, 2015 at 12:31 PM Beautiful five lines, Nette! Best wishes in the contest. As Sara says...reads like a winner. Hugs, Rhonda

Kp Nunez June 26, 2015 at 10:13 AM Just beauty in every line. Who can resist what's exotic, luscious, excites and kisses wild? No one...Loved it Nette!

Judy Konos June 25, 2015 at 1:43 PM Well alright...Good luck reads like a winner...

Norma Arana June 25, 2015 at 1:01 AM i sighed and sighed as I read this. A luscious piece of writing from a true poet!Thank you also for your going through my recent work.

Emile Pinet June 24, 2015 at 5:22 PM Your words are well chosen and convey a meaning that flows smoothly into the next line of thought painting an exquisite picture in the mind of the reader. Emile.