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Enchantment In Five Lines

Oh, garden of exotic night my flesh inhales its luscious tunes; when summer drifts, raw blooms excite kisses wild as the lilting moon, enchanting July’s glazed festoon! Sara Kendrick's Five Lines/ Metaphors And Simile 6/25/2015

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Date: 6/30/2015 10:47:00 PM
Nette Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 6/29/2015 10:17:00 PM
this is FANTABULOUS!! Congrats, dearie
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Date: 6/29/2015 6:35:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/29/2015 5:33:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Way to go with this win..Congrats..Thanks for your participation..Sara
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Date: 6/28/2015 4:27:00 PM
Sounds like you really enjoy summer. It has finally arrived! Nice write! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/27/2015 2:10:00 PM
Delightful metaphors and similes; enchanting offering! richly appealing and seductive! a winner it shall be:) hugs // paul
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Date: 6/26/2015 12:31:00 PM
Beautiful five lines, Nette! Best wishes in the contest. As Sara says...reads like a winner. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 6/26/2015 10:13:00 AM
Just beauty in every line. Who can resist what's exotic, luscious, excites and kisses wild? No one...Loved it Nette!
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Date: 6/25/2015 1:43:00 PM
Well alright...Good luck reads like a winner...
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Date: 6/25/2015 1:01:00 AM
i sighed and sighed as I read this. A luscious piece of writing from a true poet!Thank you also for your going through my recent work.
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Date: 6/24/2015 5:22:00 PM
Your words are well chosen and convey a meaning that flows smoothly into the next line of thought painting an exquisite picture in the mind of the reader. Emile.
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