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Enchantment

midnight serenade
 crescent moon smiling above ~
        playing gooseberry




Submitted for...
Hi-Ku(5) Poetry Contest (Winner: 10th Place)
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Date written: 05/10/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ashley Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 6:40 PM
Such enchanting romance, Edward. A beautifully tender haiku. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes for a happy new year. May it be filled with happiness, health, inspiration and poetry.. ~Susan
Ibeh Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 3:13 AM
Thank so very much, Susan:-) Happy New Year!
Koplin Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 10:01 AM
Loving the ink Edward! Congrats on your win!
Ibeh Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 10:08 AM
Thank you very much, Mark:-) Happy New Year!
Kauffman Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 10:00 AM
What an enchanting midnight "serenade" Edward. This is utterly charming my friend! Congratulations on your win! Happy New Year to you!
Ibeh Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 10:07 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Sam:-) Happy New Year to you as well, my friend!
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 9:55 AM
absolutely enchanting indeed the final line is perfection!:-) many congrats and happy new year Edward:-) hugs jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 10:05 AM
Thanks so much, dear Jan:-) Happy New Year to you, too!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 11, 2020 at 1:11 AM
I had to look up what playing gooseberry was, now I get it! And live it ;), xomo
Ibeh Avatar
May 11, 2020 at 6:33 AM
Thank you, Maureen:-) I'm glad you loved it!
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 10, 2020 at 7:48 PM
No one wants to be a third wheel. I enjoyed your haiku Edward. Have a great new week! xxoo
Ibeh Avatar
May 11, 2020 at 6:32 AM
Thank you, Connie:-) Have a great weekday as well!
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