Notes About The Poem
Unrhymed quatrains twelve lines To signify a dozen roses stored inside one dream love

Enchanting Whispers

Enchantment of this soul 
breathing inside the magic aroma.
Under the hawthorn bush a fragrance lingers 
appearing out of thin air my dream 

Lunar circle turning over earthern thoughts
a strawberry cream moon softly whispers 
Under the green turf you are held solid diamond 
the beauty of midnight tolls 

Growing all over the castle walls ivy emotions
gripping feelings cotton soft slippers hold a print 
Embracing cold stone warmly clinging onto chambers walls 
Transforming kisses tenderly inside the heart and soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Fiery Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 10:17 PM
This is another beautiful and creative write by a talented poet! The last two lines are simply mesmerizing !!! A7 again for this brilliant write ...Cheers ~Red
Bateman Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 6:52 AM
Magnificent piece here Liam Mate!! A powerful metaphor with some enthralling imagery. Cheers and Best, Gary
Gupta Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 8:03 PM
Lovely images ....
Petersen Potter Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 6:15 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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