Enchanting Shadows

So distant was love from her heart to mine,
 We orbited different worlds
 Yet we spun with a passion on destiny's path
 Rotating with desire as we eclipsed; 
 The enchanting shadow of love, for a moment in time,
 Fell on distant hearts, passing through the night

 6-15-2020
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Nicole Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 7:25 PM
"We spun with a passion, rotating with desire as we eclipsed" Oh my!! Such a beautiful thought. There is something magical about this poem. I am in awe. A keeper for me. :) Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 3:25 PM
a beauty, Joseph. This looks like it might be Nette's contest? I have to double check on that one!
May Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 6:19 PM
Thank you Andrea
Pandit Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 3:07 PM
Enchanting verses, Joseph--really well written.
May Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 6:18 PM
Thank you Vijay
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