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Enchanting Shadows

So distant was love from her heart to mine, We orbited different worlds Yet we spun with a passion on destiny's path Rotating with desire as we eclipsed; The enchanting shadow of love, for a moment in time, Fell on distant hearts, passing through the night 6-15-2020

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Date: 6/18/2020 7:25:00 PM
"We spun with a passion, rotating with desire as we eclipsed" Oh my!! Such a beautiful thought. There is something magical about this poem. I am in awe. A keeper for me. :) Brandy
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Date: 6/15/2020 3:25:00 PM
a beauty, Joseph. This looks like it might be Nette's contest? I have to double check on that one!
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Joseph May
Date: 6/15/2020 6:19:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 6/15/2020 3:07:00 PM
Enchanting verses, Joseph--really well written.
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Joseph May
Date: 6/15/2020 6:18:00 PM
Thank you Vijay
Date: 6/15/2020 1:23:00 PM
Hello Joseph May, Wow! I love this poem Very romantic. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/16/2020 4:56:00 PM
Hello Joseph May, enjoy your evening my friend.
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Joseph May
Date: 6/15/2020 6:18:00 PM
Thank you Darlene

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