Enchanting Invite

Stop, smell the roses and take your time.
Drop your guard and open your prosaic mind.
                                                                                   
Walk under a shower of fresh rain.
Look up beyond the common plains.

Up in the sky sets a big beautiful rainbow.
Take in the beauty, drop off your mental cargo.

Feel the breeze of the wind as it leaves no trace.
Soak up the rays of the sun beaming upon your face.

Lay out a blanket, in the middle of a flowered field.
Close your eyes, whelm up the smells it yields.

Nature rendered you into a peaceful slumber.
Enchantingly inviting you back into her chamber.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 5:30 AM
just beautiful---Charma
Devonshire Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 9:20 AM
Erin, living life to the fullest as you describe allows you to enjoy a peaceful slumber at night and look forward to the next day. Many beautiful images here! (And I cannot bring myself to erase Dad's last voice mail. When I finish moving, it will be gone.) God bless your sweet heart and Happy Friendship Week! Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 6:43 AM
Enchanted is the proper name....your poem is truly enchanting!! :) ~ Carrie
Burton Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 11:28 PM
you had me hooked when you used rain in here. enjoyed how you expressed it so well. enjoy your night. :)
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