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Enchanted Vision of Love So Pure

Enchanting deep forest sparkling magical dew 
Vision of beauty takes to clouds in silver lining 
Star lighting vision dancing with the shadows
Rainbow skies set to light mist of cool rain 
And the warmest thoughts of you my Dear Love! 

You are so very beautiful and precious My Darling 
Behind the mirror your soul sings soothingly so
Stirring hotly emotional feelings and passions afire 
How the passion burns the flower of flowers so rare 
Regal crowning desires petals touching so softly My Dear! 

Silken lips purse blushing one rose holding bright
Sunshine beams inside warm fingers of light touch 
Stroking hair gently halo radiating chords deeply dance 
Looking into jewels of a treasure gem shines so exquisitely
Gifted I am to have met your beautiful soul and You Too! 

Over and over my heart skips beats when we caress and kiss 
Beams jumping over the moon silver whispers wonderful so
Silently making love to you in every single thought of mine 
Hot sexy kissing and so sensual in every inch nibbling softly
Within the deepest love inside loving you forever My Love!

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem,                  
Copyright © All Rights Reserved (December 25, 2014)                           
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/4/2015 12:30:00 PM
Liam, Enjoyed working with you on this one! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 12/29/2014 7:25:00 PM
A7 superb write... :)! enchanting and beautifully crafted.. :) Happy NEw YEar!!! olive eloisa GBU!
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Date: 12/29/2014 6:48:00 AM
A gala of enchanting verses that mesmerizes the mind and enriches the soul! Congratulations to both of you dear, Liam and Gary, Gary and Liam for this monumental collaboration. Happy New Year! A seven for each!
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Date: 12/29/2014 4:07:00 AM
I quote LM,"Every time you guys team up its magic".""Enchanted Vision of Love So Pure"" is no exception. Gary's brain+ Liam's heart= miracle. A fav One of the best I have read..perfect balance--Liam Gary thanks for the NY Gift....rajat
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Date: 12/28/2014 6:16:00 PM
Liam and Gary.. Every time you guys team up its magic.. Love the energy, passion, and creativity that flow from your combined pen!
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Date: 12/28/2014 12:57:00 PM
This make me dream to go back on the time, tres bien.
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Date: 12/28/2014 12:55:00 PM
Liam, this pen is just majestic! I love the line-looking into jewels of a treasured gem shines so exquisitely... Great pen! Meg
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Date: 12/28/2014 8:51:00 AM
Once again, Liam and Gary...well done! Romantic poetry presented with feeling. #7 May you have a peaceful and positive new year. // paul
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Date: 12/28/2014 4:16:00 AM
- My friends, everything about this poem is beautiful; a real pleasure to read - as always - At least once a day we should read a good poem, see a beautiful picture, and - if possible - say a few sensible words - A write that deserves a "7+" !!!! - Our hearts know, our eye reads - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/27/2014 5:33:00 PM
Hi Liam and Gary ! This is another very beautiful and romantic poem. Just dazzling! Enchantingly magical love story! Another glowing diamond from your golden pens! So full of love passion and romance , one to be held very close to ones heart, my dearest friends. I was so moved I cried a lot reading it. So beautiful in all especially the happy ending. This very lucky couple stay together. love it! A solid 7 ++++ for each of you! You are great poets indeed! Oh yes, Gary you two deserve my praises. I wish you both a very happy Holiday Season and New Year with your families! And Liam I pray to God that He embrace you with all the warmth of His love and He guides everyday and gives you his peace and more of His wisdom forever and ever. And may He give you more of His strength too. Have a very lovely evening ! :) Love and hugs! xxoxxoxx D.
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Date: 12/27/2014 3:58:00 PM
A nice joint effort, gentlemen; I enjoyed the read. :) john.
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Date: 1/13/2015 8:51:00 AM
thank you john for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated