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Author's Notes: The free verse co-authored write by Liam McDaid and me is called: "Enchanted Vision of Love So Pure." It's another one of our love specialty poems, in this instance, specifically written to portray the essence and the metaphor of an "enchanted vision of love so pure." We both hope that you will like this dynamic love write. (Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid, December 25, 2014) (Free Verse)

Categories: allegory, beauty, emotions, feelings, love, imagery, and metaphor.

Enchanting deep forest sparkling magical dew Vision of beauty takes to clouds in silver lining Star lighting vision dancing with the shadows Rainbow skies set to light mist of cool rain And the warmest thoughts of you my Dear Love! You are so very beautiful and precious My Darling Behind the mirror your soul sings soothingly so Stirring hotly emotional feelings and passions afire How the passion burns the flower of flowers so rare Regal crowning desires petals touching so softly My Dear! Silken lips purse blushing one rose holding bright Sunshine beams inside warm fingers of light touch Stroking hair gently halo radiating chords deeply dance Looking into jewels of a treasure gem shines so exquisitely Gifted I am to have met your beautiful soul and You Too! Over and over my heart skips beats when we caress and kiss Beams jumping over the moon silver whispers wonderful so Silently making love to you in every single thought of mine Hot sexy kissing and so sensual in every inch nibbling softly Within the deepest love inside loving you forever My Love! Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (December 25, 2014) (Free Verse)

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2015 5:08:00 PM

Gary, you are so sweet when replying to my comemnts...LINDA

Gary Bateman
Date: 4/27/2015 5:43:00 PM

Thanks Linda. It is always very nice to hear from you too. BTW, I just placed a couple of ADs on PoetrySoup's Classified AD link about my new book which was released to the public on April 9th. I hope all continues to go well for you. Best Always, Gary

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/27/2014 2:18:00 PM

A lovely sentiment; well written and from the heart. Happy new year!

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/27/2014 3:54:00 PM

Thanks ML from both me and Liam on this one. Best New Year's Wishes too!! Gary

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/27/2014 1:53:00 PM

blended together beautifully gary what a pleasure writing this with you pal passing you a big smile

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/27/2014 3:53:00 PM

Enjoyed my partnership with you Liam Mate on this sparkling write!! Best, Gary

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/25/2014 10:59:00 PM

Once again i see love in poetry,as usual you bring excellence to fore here;no doubt both of you have delivered,congrats Gary,congrats Liam and merry Christmas to all...huggs

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/26/2014 9:49:00 AM

KAYOD 5!! Thanks for your most wonderful comments and for your read of our co-written love piece here. I'm glad you enjoyed it!! And I'm sure that Liam will be commenting likewise later. Continued Best Wishes for the Holiday Season!! Alles Gute!! Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/25/2014 10:40:00 PM

Hi Gary and Liam ! This is another very beautiful and romantic poem. Just dazzling! Enchantingly magical love story! Another glowing diamond from your golden pens! So full of love passion and romance , one to be held very close to ones heart, my dearest friends. I was so moved I cried reading it. A solid 7 ++++ for each of you! You are great poets indeed! Oh yes, Gary you two deserve my praises. I wish you both a very happy Holiday Season and New Year with your families! Have a joyful day ! :) Love and hugs! xxoxxoxx D.

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/26/2014 9:44:00 AM

Dear "D", I always enjoy hearing from you as does Liam. (He will see your comment here later.) I'm pleased you liked our co-write here. (We didn't mean to make you cry, but since you did it sounds like we hit the right chords to stimulate emotions -- I hope it wasn't too much!!) Continued best wishes to you for the Holiday Season. We have more of these writes coming out!! XOXO Gary

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2014 9:48:00 PM

WOW, now this is poetry... Gary, Enjoy your days and the coming New Year. Love ~LINDA~

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/26/2014 9:38:00 AM

Hello Linda!! I like your Christmas Holiday Hat in your photo!! Just right for the holiday season. Thanks for your read of our co-authored poem. Best Wishes too for 2015. Best Always, Gary

Jan Allison

Date: 12/25/2014 5:33:00 PM

simply stunning so romantic I do enjoy your collaborations Gary - gave Liam a 7 when he posted it so you will get the same:-) hugs jan xxx

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/25/2014 5:50:00 PM

Thanks Jan!! for the super rating -- Best Holiday Wishes, Gary