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Enchanted Kiss

As the sun finally, silently slips from view I sit and I watch and I think of you while low clouds gather laden with rain I watch and I wait with thoughts of you again then droplets gently fall at last and with them the evenings spell is cast then slowly drift I unto that realm that magical world where dreams are held Then there you are in that far away land walking toward me with your outstretched hand and welcome me to this land of bliss with a soft and warm enchanted kiss

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Date: 4/1/2020 9:09:00 PM
The rain holds a breathtaking melody, one that I enjoy being lost in. Cotton candy clouds caress a tender sky- as the wind whispers. Gently. You have created a masterpiece. This is so beautiful and romantic. :) Brandy
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/1/2020 11:39:00 PM
And that is how it should be. A tender embrace, "with a soft and warm enchanted kiss" I like this version. Breathtaking indeed. :) Brandy
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Kevin Duncil
Date: 4/1/2020 10:11:00 PM
Please share your thoughts on this completed version Brandy. I will longingly await your response. :) Kevin
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Kevin Duncil
Date: 4/1/2020 9:53:00 PM
Thank you Brandy! Very glad that you liked it. It seems however that all of the poem didn't make it to the page, i.e., i have a bit of editing to do.

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