Enchanted Forest

Sun – at first dusk leaving footsteps to follow
After a smooth, relentless retreat
Mystical breeze, dancing gracefully – leaf to leaf
Upon the arms of every tree
Exquisite sounds of the night harmonizing
The sacred songs and sensual secrets of paradise
Beautiful swans circling and singing erotic
Melodies --- throughout exotic flight
Moonlight glistened in sanctity from its reflection
In the agitated but subdued creek
Scents of blooming and blossomed flowers
Bombarded the night air with delectable sweets

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 5/29/2009 6:50:00 AM
It is not only the music of your heart that makes your write delightful, but the spiritual sense with which you invest the sense in feelings presence ... it uplifts your art to peaks of high esteem. Love and praise.
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Date: 4/13/2009 12:34:00 AM
Ah, those dusk scents. Night blooming jasmine in particular. Your poem has captured nature's beauty, its sights, sounds, and scents. This is a beautiful tribute to nature. Very nice! Dane
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Date: 12/9/2008 7:29:00 AM
An enchanting and magical write filled with wonderful images and sweet sounds. Wishing you a Happy Holiday season! Peace always, John
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Date: 9/2/2008 6:07:00 AM
You have a magnificant style of writing. It leaves beauty in it's path.
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Date: 6/13/2008 2:15:00 PM
So beautiful! Congratulations on your win in Kristin's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 6/13/2008 7:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Kristin's contest Des Juan. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/12/2008 6:32:00 PM
I like the active nature of this poem. It has a whimsical feel. Congratulations on being one of the Celebrating Nature contest winners. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 6/12/2008 4:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win in my contest - this poem absolutly enchanted me, with its vivid imagry to soft words, you took me there - well done! i loved it! Continue writing! Love Kristin
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