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Enchanted Flights

A chorus of crickets create melodies for sweet slumber Where dreams take wing on enchanted flights to far away places But even in a dream she disappears from my heart musicians change and feathery melodies light up the dawn As the coffee pot begins churning out cups of caffeine Daydreams take me to faraway places, there, my heart will find her 10-4-2021 Your Best Sijo Poetry Contest Sponsor: William Kekaula

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Date: 11/21/2021 11:27:00 AM
I see you won William's contest AND Potd. This was a great successful poem for you! and again, I really love it as well!
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Date: 10/16/2021 12:55:00 PM
Crickets do make melodious sounds for us to slumber, unless one creeps into the bedroom and you cant find him to throw him out, they make these noises with their wings but it is almost impossible to find him. We have inherited a family of frogs in our garden, so cute. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 10/15/2021 1:49:00 PM
I have read your winner and see its good qualities. Way to go in the contest. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 10/13/2021 11:25:00 PM
Joseph, the heart is never far from true love my friend. Nicely done, Aloha!
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Date: 10/13/2021 11:16:00 PM
Great romantic work. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/12/2021 1:21:00 PM
what wonderful imagery Joseph i especially love the opening line:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/11/2021 4:05:00 PM
This is wonderful, Joseph. I see you got a POTD. Big congrats for that.
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Date: 10/10/2021 10:58:00 AM
I loved the beginning line itself..Joseph. yes what doesn't happen in real life... is possible in dreams... A beautiful write... Best wishes... ~ Ani
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Date: 10/9/2021 11:50:00 AM
A dreamy to ponder my friend. I loved it! Thank you for congrats on my POTD! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 10/4/2021 8:20:00 PM
Anything is possible, in a dream. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 10/4/2021 3:19:00 PM
Very nice poem Joseph. I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 10/4/2021 11:16:00 AM
Our daydreams take us where ever we want to be and hopefully find romance. Tom
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Date: 10/4/2021 7:27:00 AM
An enchanting poem. I love such poems.
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Date: 10/4/2021 6:19:00 AM
Where dreams take wing---enchanting indeed. Enjoyed the journey through your words, Joseph. Win BIG!
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