Connie Marcum Wong Poet Rhyme

Enchanted Earth - Constanza

I have known ethereal bliss.
A crystal sea, serenity....
Imparts visions to memory.

Endowed by heaven's cosmic kiss, 
A peaceful healing I can share
With those who need my love and care.

By star light from this great abyss
Luna welcomes her night time sky.
When full or new, emotions fly.

How could I not be changed by this? 
She wields her power over me, 
Yet I am charmed, how can this be? 

The glory of this earth I'll miss.
Though when I leave this realm one day
Sparks from my life are sure to stay.

I have known ethereal bliss.
Endowed by heaven's cosmic kiss, 
By star light from this great abyss
How could I not be changed by this? 
The glory of this earth I'll miss. 

7-19-20

If this was my last poetry contest poetry contest
Sponsor Silent One

My last poem would have to be about this enchanted earth, the moon and stars, and it would have to be in my Constanza form.

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Unseeking Seeker September 20, 2022 at 8:43 PM Ah! A fav, as Connie’s soul smiles on in heaven, as she did, while on earth

Anne E Sangster - K October 11, 2021 at 10:49 PM An absolutely beautiful poem Connie. A fav for me indeed! Cheers Anne:-)

Susan Ashley October 22, 2020 at 9:23 PM Connie, wow, your beautifully eloquent poem captures thoughts and feelings I’ve so often had too. Enchanting Earth is enchanting poetry. “How could I not be changed by this?” This splendid piece inspires thoughtful and expansive introspection, my dear friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

John Watt August 22, 2020 at 11:12 PM Connie, I somehow missed this one earlier, but what a delight to read it tonight! I love your words "How could I not be changed by this?" I feel this way so often, enchanted by the amazing creation that surrounds us. Awe and wonder. Love your Constanza poem ~ John

M. L. Kiser August 13, 2020 at 6:11 PM Just a beautiful write, "I have known ethereal bliss. Endowed by heaven's cosmic kiss, " magical.

Phyllis Babcock July 31, 2020 at 5:49 PM A beautiful creative write Connie. My sincere condolences to you and your family on your loss. My heart goes out to you at this sad time. God bless you and comfort you. love phyl.

Tom Cunningham July 30, 2020 at 9:15 PM A very creative form Connie, and a beautiful poem too, Tom

Carolyn Devonshire July 30, 2020 at 11:07 AM Just returning to offer congrats on your win, Connie. Your form is beautiful and creative. The beauty of heaven and earth comes through so well in your words. No need to write just now. I'm so sorry for your loss; recovery will take time. Much love, Carolyn Connie Marcum Wong July 31, 2020 at 10:49 AM Yes it will take time to heal from my loss of my soul mate. Thank you Carolyn. Blessings xxoo

Aditi Mishra July 28, 2020 at 11:27 AM Ah! If this had been your last poem I would've been lucky to travel on this enchanting journey of Earth with the form you created. This is so soothing Connie! Congratulations on your win :) Blessings and love!

John Gondolf July 28, 2020 at 10:23 AM Of course your last poem would have to be a Constanza! I love this piece, Connie, you write your form so well. Hugs, John

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu July 27, 2020 at 6:57 AM Very lovely one,dont give up age is just a number. What keeps a man going is The Heart,if You think and feel Young,i bet You,You never grow that old. We love You,i appreciate your stay on earth and truly when You gone(not now or soon). I believe your legacy will live on. Thanks for This excellent write.

Lindsay Laurie July 26, 2020 at 9:54 PM Hello Connie ... another wordly treasure from your creative mind Connie. I can picture the beauty once again - thank you Connie - Lindsay

Eve Roper July 26, 2020 at 4:33 PM Back with congratulations on your win with these beautiful poem. Hugs Eve

Ann Gilmour July 26, 2020 at 11:41 AM So cleverly written Connie and such stunningly beautiful images you have portrayed my friend. Many congratulations on your well deserved win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Krish Radhakrishna July 26, 2020 at 6:00 AM Congrats! A wonderful new format! Constanza! I would like to try this!

Line Gauthier July 26, 2020 at 5:48 AM Beautiful delivery ~ very charming. Congrats on your well deserved win, Connie.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 26, 2020 at 5:32 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Imran Islam July 26, 2020 at 5:13 AM Beautifully written, Connie. Loved this. God bless!

V. Deepa July 26, 2020 at 4:01 AM Beautiful poem Connie mam. Loved the line~Endowed by heaven's cosmic kiss..Enjoyed every lines in your Muse. Keep inspiring.Congratulations on your win:-) Take care.With love~Deepa:-)

Silent One July 26, 2020 at 2:40 AM and what a beautiful last poem it would be, but why in such a difficult form? Lol... What would the soup do without you??? How ironic, PS was down and this could have been the last contest for me! Congratulations on your placement in the contest Connie Marcum Wong July 26, 2020 at 11:47 AM Thank you very much for my placement Silent. I missed PS while it was down. Blessings xxoo

Eve Roper July 25, 2020 at 9:34 AM Beautiful verse, Connie.

Andrea Dietrich July 24, 2020 at 3:46 PM wow, you used your own form and came up with something so pretty, Connie. Divine!! Will you use it for the Constanza contest too? I used an oldie from 2010 - All Fall. Do you remember ? I think it may have been my very first one. Connie Marcum Wong July 25, 2020 at 2:45 AM I do remember it Andrea. I love that one. I have another I will use for his contest. I have never posted it before. Thank you Andrea. We are battening down the hatches preparing for the hurricane that may well become a tropical storm if it goes far enough north of us. It will arrive Sunday. xxoo

Jenna Logan July 24, 2020 at 8:22 AM Your Constanza form is wonderfully creative, Connie, as is this entry into the contest. I hesitate to try it for a current Constanza contest, but I think I will and hope it does justice to your creative form. Jenna Logan July 25, 2020 at 9:06 AM That's a great idea, and I'll use it. Thank you, Connie. Connie Marcum Wong July 24, 2020 at 11:38 AM Thank you very much Jenna. I know it is a bit of a challenge to create a poem in the Constanza form. If you start with creating your Monorhyme first it will be much easier to complete. Blessings xxoo

Joseph P. DiMino July 23, 2020 at 4:03 PM Hi Connie; lovely poetry. I think the earth will also miss you, wanting you back as soon as possible:) She is not so cold as to let such warmth just fade away. As her moon always keeps a light on. Great writing my friend! Connie Marcum Wong July 23, 2020 at 4:14 PM I love the idea that her moon always keeps a light on! Thank you for such a lovely comment Joe. If we all took more the time to appreciate the earth we would have a more peaceful planet. Thank you very much my friend. Blessings xxoo

Carolyn Devonshire July 23, 2020 at 10:05 AM We do leave an imprint on Earth after we depart and your Reiki allows you to assume your role as healer, Connie. Surely, we will miss Earth's beauty, but I'm hopeful that heaven's glory will be wondrous. I love the spiritual quality of your poem and you use this form so well! Surely a winner in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn (fave) Connie Marcum Wong July 23, 2020 at 2:59 PM Thank you Carolyn. I think heaven is all we may imagine and much more. I so appreciate the fave and your insightful comment. Blessings xxoo

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