En Pointe

“EN POINTE”

My Darlings, what a lovely way to pass the time “en pointe.”
 Arching your back, trying desperately to counterpoint the feet,
The smile on your faces can not hide the pain of it all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 9:54 PM
wow, this one is amazing. One of the very best I think I have seen!! (if for the contest, right?)
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May 18, 2011 at 6:21 AM
Hi Andrea, The very minute I put it in the contest the PS site went down and it locked up my computer. I sent a Soup Mail to the sponsor to verify it went in the contest, I just haven't heard back yet. I sure hope it made it in. Thanks for your impression of the effort. All the best JT
Mehta Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 12:47 PM
hahahah full of humor and wit, enjoyed En Pointe, John
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May 17, 2011 at 11:38 AM
I am so pleased to have had the pleasure to read your awesome poetry this afternoon JT. Thank you for sharing it with us. Hoping you have a week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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