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EN POINTE ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Upon a dimly lit state she stands en pointe, defying gravity. Time pauses, suspended like dust motes dancing in the spotlight. She holds the moment like a fragile glass ornament, balancing herself on the edge between her grace and strength. What thoughts swirl in her mind, as the audience holds its breath? Does she ponder the road that led her here, the sacrifices, the bruises, the pain? Or does she simply bask in the glow, the blissful beauty of the moment, where she is both dancer and the dance? The curtain rises; her spirit soars anchored in the grace of holding on, the beauty of standing still, en pointe.

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Date: 8/10/2025 2:25:00 AM
I find great delight in the truthfulness, authenticity, and wit woven through your poem, dear Sara. There lies the essence of creativity, indeed! What a splendid piece of writing!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/10/2025 4:41:00 PM
Thanks, Sotto, for your kind, always encouraging words. I appreciate your enthusiasm for my creativity and this poem...have a splendid week, Sara
Date: 8/10/2025 1:49:00 AM
A lovely write Sara and that mouse is so blasted cute!!Ha….Debx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/10/2025 4:40:00 PM
thank you, Deb, for your kind words. I agree..that mouse is just adorable. Have a great week, hugs, Sara
Date: 8/9/2025 5:50:00 PM
Very nice poem Sara. I can see moment she ponders :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/9/2025 5:51:00 PM
thank you, Heidi! I appreciate your visit and comments...hugs, Sara
Date: 8/9/2025 5:04:00 PM
the blissful beauty of the moment, where she is both dancer and the dance…very nice!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/9/2025 5:49:00 PM
awww, thank you for your visit and your positive comments. hugs, Sara

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