En Carnival

God, smiling Gave to men license Sing in Joy Dance in love Merge body and soul Raise ye up the Holy din To God's ears In Samba Writhe orgiastic Sweetly sweat Crying out The birth pangs of life In joyous recognition Of His gift
By William Kershaw for Nette's Share a Shadorma contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Harper Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 6:32 PM
Good luck on the contest, you capture a wonderful dance together.
Guzzi Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 4:24 PM
The limb worn dance of life! Light & Love
K Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 8:33 PM
Beautiful William!
Kendrick Avatar
August 24, 2011 at 9:31 AM
Yes, God gave us the permission to enjoy life and we should..Enjoyed reading this morn..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 10:29 PM
Very interesting take on the theme. I especially liked the first stanza. VERY nice. As for the perfect one, he is a dream man, so of course nobody is going to guess who it is. I don't know him either!!
Jones Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 9:54 PM
Bravo!
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