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God, smiling Gave to men license Sing in Joy Dance in love Merge body and soul Raise ye up the Holy din To God's ears In Samba Writhe orgiastic Sweetly sweat Crying out The birth pangs of life In joyous recognition Of His gift
By William Kershaw for Nette's Share a Shadorma contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/12/2013 6:32:00 PM
Good luck on the contest, you capture a wonderful dance together.
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Date: 11/22/2012 4:24:00 PM
The limb worn dance of life! Light & Love
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Date: 3/7/2012 8:33:00 PM
Beautiful William!
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Date: 8/24/2011 9:31:00 AM
Yes, God gave us the permission to enjoy life and we should..Enjoyed reading this morn..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 8/23/2011 10:29:00 PM
Very interesting take on the theme. I especially liked the first stanza. VERY nice. As for the perfect one, he is a dream man, so of course nobody is going to guess who it is. I don't know him either!!
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Date: 8/19/2011 9:54:00 PM
Bravo!
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