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Emptyness

Night By Night Day by Day My mine swirling in continous confusion Searching for a soulful melody That would feel that empty position A staircase that takes me to a place of no where A door that is open Though it does not promise a place of growth, comfort, and acceptance Rather a place that is indescribable No one person can describe its power A place of silence A noticable place of tranquility But by creating its tranquility The tranquility is disrupted A place that controdicts itself A place we all find ourself lurking upon A road that we are forced to travel Yet a choice that we make A choice that will possibly lead us to self incrimination A door, a room, a space that we are left to design To alter, to perfect, to make a haven, a paradise But by creating this paradise, we may be forced To fail, to die, to burn And learn from previous mistakes An oppurtunity to transform your world from Inconsistancies and disappoints To a world of Fortune and ultimate fame Or easily vice versa A key is offered unexpectedly Into this full but empty apartment Of love

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Date: 11/30/2010 10:00:00 AM
can feel the emotions
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Date: 11/24/2010 10:38:00 AM
Please continue to share your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving Shaquan. Love, Carol
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