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Empty Words

Words at the edges Of your Tongue Are not merely Words. A Thought trying Desperately to be expressed. If hope lie in words Is Hopelessness the absence? No sound, no chirp, no brighter day ahead. Engulfed by Darkness and Dread If words are crucial to meaning Why are they misused? When slang destroys the basis of Thought When LOL substitutes true Laughter When a text makes Emotion obsolete… What do we do next? Just ink on paper Stained but not Bled We await the future Words…..

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Date: 7/20/2012 10:32:00 AM
Fear not language has always GROWN and you can help see that the old is not forgotten as well as learn the new! Congrad's on your fine write making it through to round one in an international poetry contest. Light & Love
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Date: 7/18/2012 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Takashi. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/16/2012 2:48:00 PM
I like this poem abd agree with your thoughts on electronic devices replacing face-to-face communication.
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Date: 3/12/2012 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Takashi. Love, Carol
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