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Empty Willow Tree

empty willow tree
bare limbs hang still no birds come...
birds' water frozen  

birds' chirps all quiet
front yard filled with birds feeding...
oak shed its acorns

naturehaiku

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Constance La France

February 3, 2013 at 12:30 PM

Sara, it always amazes me how the little sparrows, so tiny still come on the coldest of winter days, to chirp and sing, I like your double haiku very much, Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 3, 2013 at 2:45 AM

It's so nice to see when they come to eat the bird food. - Nice haiku Sara. - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

February 2, 2013 at 3:27 PM

i too love the scene you paint with words here...

Andrea Dietrich

February 2, 2013 at 1:19 PM

love this picture, Sara. How are you?

Russell Sivey

February 2, 2013 at 12:26 PM

This is a beautiful image of natures finest, birds and the trees! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious poem this afternoon! You have painted a wondrous picture of God's creatures enjoying a cold day! We are freezing here, and with some snow falling today, will have snow all week almost, that ought to be a lot of fun! You have written a fantastic write here Sara! What a pleasurable piece, Great Work!!