Empty Well

Feels like we’ve set each other adrift 
Thin hugs are no gift
Your clothes hang in our closet
Frames of smiling faces sunshine backdrop 
Me talking to another shouldn’t make you shudder
Now it’s too late to recreate 
Something that was once so great
It’s like trying to fix my grandmother's broken blue plate
It was priceless and now
no amount of glue could hold us together 
Choking on cold leftovers of affection
Isn’t something I had reckoned
If it’s over, please tell. 
So I can know if your love has reached the bottom of its well.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gondolf Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 11:43 AM
I discovered your poetry this afternoon and have enjoyed reading it, Nancy, I hope to read more soon. John
Beckman  Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 6:43 PM
Thank you, John! Yes, more to come! :)
Rodgers Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 11:40 AM
You've elegantly captured a very dificult moment. Well done.
Beckman  Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 7:40 PM
Thank you D.W Rodgers! :)
Rodgers Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 1:46 PM
and welcome to the Soup
Grant Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 10:42 AM
Fantastic! Nancy I really like your style of writing I can't wait to read more thanks for posting. All the best!
Beckman  Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 7:00 PM
Thanks for the comment, Mike! Yes, plenty more to come. Have a nice night.
Inman Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 8:20 PM
A sad write Nancy
Beckman  Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 3:53 PM
"apropos" - good one. Adding it to my word bank lol.
Inman Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 8:37 AM
A very positive view of a difficult situation-some cliches are apropos.
Beckman  Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 8:06 PM
Can't have flowers without the rain! - I know cliché, ha.
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