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Based upon a real dream I had after 911.

Empty streets, I dreamt about them; and a payphone - did it ring? Could it be stranger things repurposed in the preponderant dark? After 2000 was the hustle and bustle of mortar and dust; were there butterflies? I dreamt this dream after that, but presently the streets are clear except for pigeons and the law. No pretzel carts. Broadway busted. But the phone, did it ring; what does it mean? I was alone. I don’t think payphones existed on the payroll anymore. There’s a phone in a glass box. I want to know what it means. I thought I knew but it seems there may be more: more empty streets; more to my dream. 4/1/2020

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Date: 4/6/2020 1:38:00 PM
Fabulous, Kim Panagiota Xxxx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/6/2020 2:23:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 4/3/2020 8:32:00 AM
Powerful, especially now when all the streets are empty.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2020 8:39:00 AM
Thank you, D.W.!
Date: 4/3/2020 5:47:00 AM
So strange the empty streets few people fewer cars- I live in countryside so it is usually silent but for the birds but now it is eerie- loved your words- so apt- Blessings, Julie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2020 6:23:00 AM
I know what you mean! I’ve gone on a few walks. Maybe one or two cars pass me by. Such a strange time! Thank you, Julie!
Date: 4/1/2020 11:07:00 PM
A dream of prediction Kim, So apt for today..Great poetry, love it....
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2020 7:33:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 4/1/2020 11:04:00 PM
The streets are pretty empty now, so maybe the dream was prophetic of more troubled times? Amazing poem, Kim. Blessings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2020 7:34:00 AM
I think so. Blessings to you too!
Date: 4/1/2020 8:15:00 PM
I too am intrigued by that pay phone ringing. Perhaps you are getting a ring from someone who passed away many years ago?... Stay tuned... Smiles, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2020 10:27:00 PM
Who knows!

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