Michael Jordan Poet Free verse

Empty Straws

There are times 
         When I'm alone
       That I feel so lost
         I am no longer
           Who I was
          I am not yet
        Who I hope to be
     Somewhere in the middle
     I grasp at empty straws

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Ron Ryan July 31, 2008 at 10:12 PM also a big thanks for the kind words about "shadows of myself"...to answer your question no i havent had it made into a painting yet but i am dying to

Ron Ryan July 31, 2008 at 10:10 PM i love short poems that say so much....will definitely be reading more of yours ...i love empty straws

Ron Ryan July 31, 2008 at 10:09 PM michael, your poems are GREAT! so talented...thank you for your kind words about my vincent poem..his life fascinates me..your compliment (with your obvious talent) means alot. thanks a bunch

Heidie Buys July 29, 2008 at 5:49 PM So very true to life and so well written. You really touched me with this one. Well done. Regards Heidie

James Foulk July 28, 2008 at 12:45 PM i truly enjoyed reading this poem and i feel the same way sometimes.

Sharon Winter July 28, 2008 at 7:15 AM This is an incredible expression, a beautiful write. There is so much here and all of it I can relate to. Profound poetry that touches me deeply. Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt July 28, 2008 at 4:57 AM I believe we all position ourselves there at times and some stay longer than others, I know. This is so descriptive and clear in meanxing. Excellent flow and just a terrific read my friend. Michael