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Empty Straws

There are times When I'm alone That I feel so lost I am no longer Who I was I am not yet Who I hope to be Somewhere in the middle I grasp at empty straws

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Ron Ryan

Date: 7/31/2008 10:12:00 PM

also a big thanks for the kind words about "shadows of myself"...to answer your question no i havent had it made into a painting yet but i am dying to

Ron Ryan

Date: 7/31/2008 10:10:00 PM

i love short poems that say so much....will definitely be reading more of yours ...i love empty straws

Ron Ryan

Date: 7/31/2008 10:09:00 PM

michael, your poems are GREAT! so talented...thank you for your kind words about my vincent poem..his life fascinates me..your compliment (with your obvious talent) means alot. thanks a bunch

Heidie Buys

Date: 7/29/2008 5:49:00 PM

So very true to life and so well written. You really touched me with this one. Well done. Regards Heidie

James Foulk

Date: 7/28/2008 12:45:00 PM

i truly enjoyed reading this poem and i feel the same way sometimes.

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/28/2008 7:15:00 AM

This is an incredible expression, a beautiful write. There is so much here and all of it I can relate to. Profound poetry that touches me deeply. Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 7/28/2008 4:57:00 AM

I believe we all position ourselves there at times and some stay longer than others, I know. This is so descriptive and clear in meanxing. Excellent flow and just a terrific read my friend. Michael